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Test post: What is your ‘Personal Essay’ about?

Posted by: stark | October 28, 2008 | 22 Comments |



Tell me what you wrote your ‘Personal Essay’ about in Writing class.

Please respond using AT LEAST 3 complete sentences by clicking on the ‘Comments’ link here.

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My personal essay was about me wanting to be an architect.I chose that because i thought it would be fun to design buildings.I love to draw and i want to be an architect to make more buildings to give more choices of jobs and other things.Thats what i wrote for my personal essay.

what I was writing about was how to become or to play as a basketball player. It is an alright story on how to become a basketball player. It tells you all about the basics on basketball. I wrote this story because I always play and watch basketball.

For the Personal Essay I wrote about scoring a hat trick in competitive soccer. A hat trick is when someone scores three goals in one game. Scoring a hat trick in competitive soccer is hard.

My personal essay is about me dreaming to become a scientist. I want to become a scientist because i want to find cures for dieseases that can’t be treated. Also I love wearing those cool scientist robe……. if that’s what their called. That is my dream!!!!!!!!!!

My Personal Essay writing was that I was trying to get a scholarship. We all had to think of 3 things that could help us reach our goal. The 3 things I thought of were making the right choises, getting good grades, and never giving up. I thought it was a great idea to do that!!!!!

I wrote my personal essay about becoming a singer.I liked to sing since I was a little.My family likes to sing too like me.I take lessons and go to chorus.

My Personal Essay is about me wanting to become a professinol gymnast at the 2016 olympics. It’s also about what i have to do to get there i have to have straight arms and legs and pointed toes, its also about how important gymnastics is to me. It also about if i dont make it ill keep trying and all the hard work would pay off. I could become something eles. My essay is so important to be because it lets people know about me.

my personal essay is about me becoming a pro video game maker. the 3 sentances i wrote were how i nedded to be able to hire good employees, be good with electronics, and have a good imagination. thats what i wrote about

my persanal essay is about street racer.I really want to become a street racer. Iwant to drive really fast

My goal in life is to become the greatest rockstar in the world!!!!!! I think i will become a very cool rockstar. Thats what i want to become a rockstar.

My essay is becoming President. It talks about three thing that I think I need to do. I think someday I will become President.

I wrote about what I to be when I grow up. The first thing I wrote about was to have good balence. The second thing I wrote about was to have stong museles.

My goal was to become a singer. I said the three most impartant ways i could reach my goal were…eating healthy keeping my breathe, teeth clean, and practice. i chose those for special reasons. i also said i hoped it would happen.

my essay is about how i what to be a doctor. I had to write 3 things that will help me be a doctor. the first one was to save money, earna scholar ship, and go to college. that is what my essay is mostly about.

My essay was about me becoming a baseball player. Things i thought that where important to becoming a ballplayer was starting young, never giving up, and having talent. Thats my essay was about.

I was doing my essay on going to college. It is about things i have to do to go to college like save money,work hard, and do your best. Now i now what to do when i go to college.

my goal was to go to usc college. I wanted to be a football player for usc. I wanted to be a running back and i wanted to know how to be a good one. I said I had to train with my brother and run at my park by my house i had to practice how to hit people when I’m running.

My personal essay is about what I want to do when I grow up. I wrote that Iwant to live on a farm and the things that will help me accomplish my goal. The things that will help me reach mygoal are learn about animals, be orginized, and never stop trying!

My personal essay is to become a muicain. I would like to take good classes. I would buy some good miterarals. I should save money to help me pay for teacher

My essay was about becoming a pilot. The reason I want to become a pilot is because my neighbor is a pilot and I went to his airport. I love to learn about the airplanes. Also I got to ride in a privite plane. He taught me all sorts of things about air plane and I thought it might be awsome some day to be a pilot.

I wrote about how I wanted to be a singer. I can sing really good. I think it would be fun to a singer.My family will always be they for me. At my chuch they I sing to. I hope I don’t get stage fright.

My um, essay is about hypnotizeing people.
I could help people stop smoking and make people buy stuff from me. That could lead to a much better life!

P.S. I’m still wondering about the pattern.

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